Mars

Hey BobcatPoet, welcome to YWS. You've probably heard this already, but the first rule here is to have two reviews done before posting your own work, and to keep up ...

Hello Maki! Sorry, it took awhile for me to get to this. Anyway, I don't have any gripes overall: your plot is going, your characters are good. So I'll just ...

Hi fragile_heart(!). I have to admit, I'm not wild about Twilight or Twilight fanfics, but I think this one was pretty good. There were a couple of technical things I ...

Granted, but you died on January 1st, 12:01. I wish I had an octopus.

Fortunately, in Martian language, "kill" means "give lots of teddy bears and flowers to," which is what they actually did.

Nope. TPBM baked something recently.

I never knew the original history of the Boleyns. So, however inaccurate, I thought it was a good movie. The actors were all good, and I'm a sucker for romance ...

Granted, but the one of the apples is the poisonous one from Snow White. I wish you would do my English homework.

Fortunately, the inhabited land was only inhabited by poisonous mushrooms.

See You Again (Miley Cyrus)

Fall.

As for technological advances I think it all depends on the economy, but I'm sure someone will come up with something awesome. Apple came out with a lot of new ...

Aww. Not anymore. TPBM likes to drink bubbly water.

I don't like ants. TPBM is a sailor.

8/10