Mars

Any more? I'm not busy this week, so I'll be able to get to them quickly.

Basically, my character is investigating a death, and at one point in the story she wants to have a body exhumed. She is not police or private eye (no official ...

If a terminally ill person decides they wish to end their life, is it acceptable for others to assist them? This would usually involve a doctor giving them a lethal ...

Hey kerryannuhh, and welcome to YWS. I'm here to review your poem, but first I want to tell you that the first rule here is to have 2 reviews done ...

Harmonious...but it doesn't seem like it really means anything. The Mystery of Sarah Jackson

Hi Rosey. 1. Usually, your thesis should be at the end of the introduction, so I would keep it at the beginning and then your first paragraph could be your ...

Hi chenka! ktw here to review your piece. First things first; I shall start with your first paragraph :) Then I'll have overall comments/suggestions. (And if I sound harsh, just ...

Hey Night! :) I noticed a few grammar errors in here, and it's really hard to read a story (however good) if it's riddled with mistakes. So I'll go through ...

You get a trigonometry problem! 4 sin 90 - 3 tan 180 = ? -insert coin-

Hi Vox! Here as you requested - sorry it took so long. Let's start! The first thing I want to say is that proper formatting would make this easier to ...

Hi Vox! Here as you requested - sorry it took so long. Let's start! The first thing I want to say is that proper formatting would make this easier to ...

You get a large stuffed Daffy Duck doll. -insert coin-

I think I missed some stuff.

" Vincent! " Evie clapped her hands delightedly. "Oh, Vincent, I knew you would bring me a present!" She twirled around the huge, stone hall, faster and faster, until she ...

Multiple journals would help me a lot, I think. I don't throw my writing away, but I'm extremely disorganized and lose most of it. Right now I have one notebook ...