Mars

Awh, WV, you're so cute!! I especially love your Winnie the Pooh shirt. I wish my school had a pajama day.

Haha. I was going to say that it's because if you broke Mercury up into little pieces, then there'd be a whole fleet of dangerous rocks hurtling towards the Earth. ...

Hello knFrance! Welcome to the site! What kind of writing do you like to do? There are a few rules here on YWS which you can find here . Most ...

I tattle on freakforchrist! And CastlesInTheSky/Sarah for all-around spectacularity in reviews, writing, friendliness, everything. And Clo and Demeter and June for helpfulness and niceness. And all th

I think Nate is a super de duper coded computer, disguised as a human. AI. I think he's too spectacular not to be a robot. Props to anyone who can ...

The World is Flat by Thomas L Friedman. He's just completely, completely wrong about everything, and the worst part is that he seems to have my global studies teacher convinced.

As promised, finally! RESPONSE TO YOUR RESPONSE TO MY RESPONSE Also, I am definitely having a hard time deciding between Mrs. Maveo and Lily. I vote for Mrs. Maveo (and ...

Evie dragged the Adeline up to the castle. It was struggling, but it was not strong enough to break free. "Let me go!" it said. "No," Evie replied. She would ...

I googled it and got North American Technical Excellence.

Unhappily Ever After In the farthest nook of the Buckingham Palace, in the kitchen pantry where no one goes save for the cook-who fortunately works in tunnel vision-a woman and ...

Evie smelled human as she prowled the forests close to the Apocalyptica HQ. But she'd been there a million and one times; she knew the forests by heart. There were ...

Long-ish? Reaaaallllllyyyyy? I'm going to divide my critique up much the same way as you divided up your chapters, if you don't mind. These will just be first impressions, I'll ...

Cat, that's excellent. For more sign humor:

Epic winners = Nate, Mesh and the mod squad.

Hi Manzanna! I quite like what you have here-I love observing people. (And you're lucky! I wish my English teacher would tell us to write short stories!) So, let's start ...