Mars

I really like the Memories one, the only suggestion I have is to not let the punctuation dominate the poem; I'd experiment with less commas and periods. But it's up ...

(These adoring comments are going to get really tiring, but) I like that one.

First of all, we wrote it makes me want to cry because it's like, well, it's like, you know how you feel things sometimes that you just cannot describe? And ...

I'm so, so sorry for this, but I spent the last hour discussing how best to eradicate vine weevils and I cannot get them out of my head. april 5. ...

I love love love Dragons. The last one does need work but it's a nice concept and I think you can make it work.

I actually like the last one! I mean, it could do with some revision, but I love the idea and the way you used symbolism and all that good stuff. ...

april 4. obsession yesterday is an encaustic memory burned, branded for ever and ever and ever into my mind. but if anyone deserves a place there (a permanent spot among ...

I'm not sure why nobody's reviewed this. So I'll have a go. I really cannot comment on historical accuracy; I do vaguely know the story of the Boleyns, but otherwise, ...

Hanza yay another one! This month, I will glutton myself on your poetry. I like the velcro/scotch tape bit, because it's SO how I feel sometimes. It makes me think ...

A haiku! I love it. I always find those hard, because you have to say so much in so little words, but you laid out the scene and it's so ...

april 3. you're so vain, i bet you'll think this poem's about you when i see you, every idea is turned upside-down every coherent thought gone and everything i wanted ...

Ha! That's such a cool structure, and it seems like something one of my old teachers would assign us. I really like it, especially the carriage and the colors ones.

Lovely, lovely, lovely (again). I love the way the first one sounds; it's gorgeous, the way it's all like, internal rhyme and 'hoo-woo' and how the form underlines the content ...

April 2. All I Need Give me beauty and give me truth! Give me freedom, equality, and love. But first, give me a clear blue sky; give me a cool ...

Hannah, I adore this. It's put some beautiful things into my head, like the last line, and the rhythm is lovely and the title fits, and I love it.