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Re: It Won't Last
Hello! WARNING: I'm going nit-picky on this one. Ray frowned at her, but he did the same as well . However , he managed to stop himself from leaping over ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Part 1 of Louisa Madison's story
Hello! Welcome to YWS! We have a rule here to spread the love - review two other works before you post your own. This just keeps the site running, and ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Hannah's NaPoWriMo Thread; Beyond Silken Birds
Absolutely beautiful. Particularly that first one - strikes a chord, for obvious reasons :) Mmhmm. I love your poetry, Hannah. It's so beautiful and fragile and real.
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: april is the cruellest month
Sorry. april 10. the 10 reasons why i liked him 1. his eyes 2. his voice 3. his hair 4. the scent of him 5. the way he gets outraged ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Easter Surprise: New YWS Chat!
Nate. You are the best. Ever. I might have to write a theme song for you. -is not usually this creepy-
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Hi
Hey, welcome to the site! I'm sure you'll find plenty to read and plenty of reviews. :) First thing, if you haven't already, you should definitely check out the Rules. ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Adna's NaPoWriMo 2009
Number 5 is a very cool picture. I like it.
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: april is the cruellest month
april 9. insecurity o love, that you were with me now not in body (though i want that too) but in spirit, then you would avow that your words are ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: The Search for Snoink
Mars was trying to find a way into the compound when something crashed into her. "Hey!" the thing exclaimed. "Watch it! Hey, you're not a Greeter!" In the dark, it ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Test The New Chat!
I love it. Thank you, Nate.
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: april is the cruellest month
This isn't a poem, it's pure stream of consciousness and it's horrid, but it's the best I can do tonight. april 8. line breaks in journal entries does not a ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Bubbles' NaPoWriMo
I absolutely adore Robin Hood. It's wonderful, especially the couplet at the end.. And I like Grapes as well.
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Hannah's NaPoWriMo Thread; Beyond Silken Birds
And can you see the tears fall down my face, because who is to say the world won't end tonight? This, and the last stanza, are my favorites. The whole ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: april is the cruellest month
This one is, interestingly, not for the babe but for Jamie. april 7. untitled what about a cherry tree? we could plant the seed, watch it grow into something beautiful. ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: april is the cruellest month
april 6. pop after work she puts on her stockings, one leg at a time, slips into black lace - the kind that causes heart attacks. face painted, eyes lined. ...
Apr 6, 2009
