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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: It Won't Last

    Hello! WARNING: I'm going nit-picky on this one. Ray frowned at her, but he did the same as well . However , he managed to stop himself from leaping over ...

    Apr 11, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Part 1 of Louisa Madison's story

    Hello! Welcome to YWS! We have a rule here to spread the love - review two other works before you post your own. This just keeps the site running, and ...

    Apr 11, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hannah's NaPoWriMo Thread; Beyond Silken Birds

    Absolutely beautiful. Particularly that first one - strikes a chord, for obvious reasons :) Mmhmm. I love your poetry, Hannah. It's so beautiful and fragile and real.

    Apr 11, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: april is the cruellest month

    Sorry. april 10. the 10 reasons why i liked him 1. his eyes 2. his voice 3. his hair 4. the scent of him 5. the way he gets outraged ...

    Apr 10, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Easter Surprise: New YWS Chat!

    Nate. You are the best. Ever. I might have to write a theme song for you. -is not usually this creepy-

    Apr 10, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi

    Hey, welcome to the site! I'm sure you'll find plenty to read and plenty of reviews. :) First thing, if you haven't already, you should definitely check out the Rules. ...

    Apr 10, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Adna's NaPoWriMo 2009

    Number 5 is a very cool picture. I like it.

    Apr 9, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: april is the cruellest month

    april 9. insecurity o love, that you were with me now not in body (though i want that too) but in spirit, then you would avow that your words are ...

    Apr 9, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Search for Snoink

    Mars was trying to find a way into the compound when something crashed into her. "Hey!" the thing exclaimed. "Watch it! Hey, you're not a Greeter!" In the dark, it ...

    Apr 9, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Test The New Chat!

    I love it. Thank you, Nate.

    Apr 9, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: april is the cruellest month

    This isn't a poem, it's pure stream of consciousness and it's horrid, but it's the best I can do tonight. april 8. line breaks in journal entries does not a ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Bubbles' NaPoWriMo

    I absolutely adore Robin Hood. It's wonderful, especially the couplet at the end.. And I like Grapes as well.

    Apr 8, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hannah's NaPoWriMo Thread; Beyond Silken Birds

    And can you see the tears fall down my face, because who is to say the world won't end tonight? This, and the last stanza, are my favorites. The whole ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: april is the cruellest month

    This one is, interestingly, not for the babe but for Jamie. april 7. untitled what about a cherry tree? we could plant the seed, watch it grow into something beautiful. ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: april is the cruellest month

    april 6. pop after work she puts on her stockings, one leg at a time, slips into black lace - the kind that causes heart attacks. face painted, eyes lined. ...

    Apr 6, 2009


Edna began to feel like one who awakens gradually out of a dream, a delicious, grotesque, impossible dream, to feel again the realities pressing into her soul.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening