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Oh goodness. This has certainly captured your feeling well, I think. I like the repetition of 'keep walking' because it adds a sort of frantic element to the poem, which ...

Hi! “Your getting a zero on this quiz and I want you to go see Mr. Granger Should be you're . And she didn’t look at Rex for his unwanted ...

Hello hello! abstract from the rest of the world, I don't think abstract is the right word to use there because it doesn't make sense - what about distracted from ...

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Hi Do! *tacklehugglesnugs* Have you heard the song (Nothing But) Flowers by the Talking Heads? That's what this reminded me of. :D If I cannot recall why I've woken up ...

Hello! I really like this. I love how you introduce Edward - I have a picture of him as a slightly insecure, but good, musician...and we don't know much else ...

Hello! So, yeah. A limerick is a humorous, five-line poem with a rhyme scheme of AABBA - so lines 1, 2, and 5 rhyme, and then lines 3 and 4 ...

Hello! Let me first say that I love this poem. It sounds so breezy and and summery which of course is exactly what it's about, so good job on that. ...

Hello, hello! Hope, vain as it may be, never dies, I like this first stanza, it has a good rhythm. [s]Tears,[/s] the only thing they do I'm not sure you ...

Pandaaaaa! How would you like some narrative poetry? I think the structure's a little off and I dunno, it just sounds weird. Thanks so much!

Hello and welcome! On YWS, one of the rules is to spread the love. Post two reviews for every one work of your own. This is how we keep the ...

Hey aloha! So Sonny is...Sage, right? Might be a good idea to choose one or the other, otherwise it's a bit confusing; I thought we had three main characters at ...

Huge, huge, huge apologies for lateness. :oops: Anyway. When Sheanna looked around the first thought that came into her head was, Thoughts...plural? As there's more than one? :P Sheanna decided ...