Mars

Hey! I've never done lyrics before, and it's kind of hard to critique without knowing your tune, so bear with me here. I just want a guy not like the ...

Hi :) This is fairly short so I don't have much to say. Scripts (at least at this stage when it's a script and not a play/movie/serial :P) are all ...

Meepster! I will totally review this for you. Dearest, I have cried until my tears ran dry. I think it should be 'run'? But I'm not sure. Verb tenses are ...

Hey Ky ^^ So, this is a very interesting poem. I love the sort of mocking tone it has, how the poem itself is making fun of the narrator while ...

Hey Zakku! First of all, a couple of technicalities: :arrow: You need some punctuation! It doesn't have to be after every line and it doesn't have to be all commas ...

This *actually* made me get up and go see if there was ice cream in the freezer. No lie. There wasn't, though. Anyway, this is incredibly cute! Awh. First of ...

June. Prepare yourself. You are about to be my very very very first art and photography review-ee. The ring pictures, first of all, are absolutely gorgeous. I'm not sure how ...

Heya! It's well interesting to read fiction by you, as I think I've only reviewed your poetry? :D Also I'm sorry this is a bit late, I hardly check that ...

Hey, ofir's brother :) I like this. I always find haiku hard because you have to present a pretty image in so few syllables, you know? But I think you ...

Hey angel, welcome to the site! Check out the rules and review a couple of pieces, m'kay? :D So! Wow, this is a gigantic hunk of story, isn't it? You ...

Hello, hello, hello! No More Tears fall quick, As melted wax, That hardens On the floor. Nice comparison especially the last two lines, but I don't think of melted wax ...

Hello! I love this. It's like a feast for me, because I'm reading about this young beautiful couple in this amazing garden and it's being described wonderfully. Seriously, I want ...

Hey, welcome to the site! Before I critique this I'll ask you to check out the rules . Please keep a 2:1 ratio of reviews done to works posted; that ...

Hello! Just a warning: I really like this poem. I think it's really good. So that means I'm going to be especially nit-picky and harsh in this review, so it ...

Hello! This is a really interesting beginning, Talona and I don't think I've read anything like it before. Partly because it's a diary format - which is fairly rare on ...