Mars

Hey! Wow - I really like this, but you have a lot of grammar mistakes. Let's go through those first, shall we? I also may reword some things to make ...

Hey Phantom! Welcome to YWS! This story centers on the source of that rare din of angry voices, a small house at the end of the street. The illusion of ...

Hey! So, if I critique this now, you'll have four hours to edit. Not that this needs much editing. :D Is teeming with hatred, prowess, and might. Okay. So in ...

This might help you. :D

Yay Evi! :D

Hey! So, if you need a review, there's this forum where you can request them . Anyway, to make up for it I'm going to give you the super awesome ...

You a cop? Lemme see your badge. So you gunna arrest me? What d'you mean, not if I talk to you? Ain't nobody want to just talk. I'm not going ...

Heya! I really, really liked this poem. The imagery was beautiful, especially the 'velvet-violet hands' (that was my favorite part). :D Have you forgotten? I think this line is redundant, ...

Finished! Two more til I get my fifth star, guys, let's make it happen tonight.

This is beautiful, take my word for it. I'm not sure if this a speech, or a journal entry, or a personal essay, but I have one suggestion which is ...

Oh, this is so cute, Evi! I loved it. Let's see if I can help you before Monday and, incidentally, procrastinate writing my fifth entry. ;-) First of all, in ...

Hannah! Finally, I'm here...sorry it took so long. But I got my computer back! Anyway. “I won't be gone that long.” I assumed this was her mother, or a parental ...

Aye aye aye, chica.

They reached the forest just in time to see te sky turn crimson behind the elm trees. The loose pebbles covering the dirt road bounced up against the car, scratching ...

Hey Rod! At dawn there shall be due 'Due' is like a due date for an assignment. 'Dew' is what's on the leaves in the morning. That little speck of ...