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Du-ude! You're Scottish? I've only met one other Scotlander on this site so you are automatically totally awesome. Welcome! I'd like to quickly mention also before the review that there's ...

Hey Ruth! Score another one for Britain! (yes!) I'm exactly the same way - I have no idea what I want to do in life, but whatever. TV dramas sounds ...

*snuggleattacks!* and she tried to coax herself like Miss sometimes had done to her; She’s your best friend, So! A couple of issues with this. First of all, 'coax'? I ...

Happy birthday, Grandma & Grandpa! :P

Eek! Sorry this took so long - sometimes I forget to check my thread :P Okay. So. I absolutely love the first part, the actual letter, I think it's beautiful. ...

Hey! Sorry this took me so long. I do have kind of a busy week ahead, I will get to your chapters, but it might take me a couple days. ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! There was, not too long ago there was a large Jewish population I've seen grown men, it is worth mentioning I'd cut this, it clutters up ...

Zomg a sonnet, I absolutely love sonnets! Here goes my two cents: I love all of the first stanza except the second line; it needs more syllables, as it is ...

Hi! Therefore, he must focus on the present This jumped out at me because it's in present tense, instead of past tense like the rest of the story. Should be ...

Heya! I haven't read Dudette's review so sorry if I repeat anything ^_^ Now, most kids weren’t even out of bed at seven forty-five in the morning, but for the ...

Well. We've already exchanged critiques (thank you, by the way!) but I felt I should get in on this: :elephant: :smt096 And anyway, it's not a party without the elephant ...

Hey Rachel :) I very much liked this; at first I was sort of thinking, "uh, where is this going?" but it was well-written and the ending was great. I ...

Hello! It was late when we got back.[/b] Got back where? He would never rest his head on my shoulder if he was tired- too embarrassing, so I knew I ...

asdfjkl;! I clicked on this fully intending to give a helpful critique, but it seems I cannot. So I'll just tell you what I loved about it. With a couple ...