Mars

Heya! One week late, but here I am. I'll attempt to review this having (obviously) not read the rest of it :P which issued a resistant crreeeeeeeeaak. I think 'issued' ...

I know this took me way too long and I'm sorry but I'm here now! *reviews* his father’s elegant green tunic. Yeah, this description is way out of place. I ...

*continues* It rang again and again and again, Don't really thing you need the last 'and again' here, it's sort of annoying. Which actually kind of mirrors the annoying of ...

Sorry this took so long! Busy weekend. Week. Month, really. I'll be extra nitpicky to make up for it. I shouldn't cry. *shouldn't have cried It felt almost like a ...

Hiya Shina! Here as promised. So! I love this poem; even though the rhyming is quite strict I think you've pulled it off in many places and I also love ...

*snuggleattacks!* You won't read this before I (hopefully) see you again, but that's okay.

Hey octocoffee, I'm here...finally. I know, I know, I'm awful. >< So! First stanza : I love it. I think it was a really brilliant way to start, especially the ...

:o You. Are. Amazing. Well thanks for [s]wasting so much time on[/s] pouring your soul into YWS.

I'm pretty sure that 50 out of my 53 greets were during the various Purps v Blues wars. :P This is really cool! :)

Welcome! So I fell in love with you after reading konnichiwa. "Ah! She speaks Japanese! Ah!" And then I read the next sentence. Ah well. :P Anyway you can't be ...

You know that now you've figured it out, we're going to have to kill you, right? [kidding] [or am I?]

Hey gsp! So, a couple of technicalities to clear up first of all: Dialogue Grammar! “Excellent chase my brother.” Morcant said with another laugh. This is incorrect dialogue punctuation; because ...

Crouching Tuna and Writing for love is a pas are done! Dmtzr, octocoffee, gsppcrocks, and Merlin, I probably won't be able to do yours tomorrow but I'll try - should ...

Hey Tuna! Sorry this took so long. Anyway, just remember that all these are my suggestions - and since English isn't your first language (you do write in it very ...

Hi Ofir :) Firstly, I think this should be rated PG 13 because of the swearing. :) the last rays of sun coloring everything in warm colors Beautiful imagery but ...