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I found this on one of the Nano forums -- it's fun. Apparently I write like L. Frank Baum.

Woooo! I'm excited, but I have SO much to do before November...

She was very, very, very proactive! Or it's been edited...but I like proactivity better.

Your skin is a desert-- a mirage of golden sand, dead wings and twitching things. Dust spills out your mouth, wet words from mine: they will die in your ear. ...

Hellooooo. I don't know Spanish at all so I can't comment on the original at all but here are my suggestions for the English version! :) The first stanza is ...

fw4t0fd86504 Cool, basically what I expected.

Tarab ! It's an Arabic word for the intense joy that you get from losing yourself in music for hours.

right here and now. For you to live your life just so you can go fuck with with other Saying 'other guys again' is redundant. This reads as one of ...

I know you're not concerned (much) about the likability of Levi, but I like him quite a lot. And I can sort of tell what you mean about him being ...

I like this, and I like that I liked Morgenstern even after he punched the girl (the first time) but really didn't want to like him, and I like that ...

Hello! This is a lovely piece - you clearly have a knack for description and I liked the repetition of 'it's okay' at first although by the end it seemed ...

And just the more extreme weather since it's farther north is daunting to me. Or is the weather not much colder than like southern/mid England? I don't know how cold ...

I go to the University of Edinburgh and am horribly biased so take whatever I say with a grain of salt :) but I think it's amazing. Can I ask ...

Hi Deathcurrent! I'm assuming this story is the beginning of a longer story, and so I can't really comment on the plot except to say that I want to read ...