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Mari1901

  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Fairy Lights

    As a writer of course I believe everything I write is crap, but I don't mind at all when people tell me the opposite. Hahaha If anything it is encouragement ...

    Dec 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Fairy Lights

    Thank you very much for the riview! You are right that the word "princess" was supposed to feel like that, but I will definitely give that article a read. And ...

    Dec 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Fairy Lights

    Hello! Thanks for the review

    Dec 19, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Fairy Lights

    You are way too kind.

    Dec 18, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Night

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Night

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Goodbye (Edited 2)

    I'm back! This version is so much better story-wise. There is still information missing, but I have always said that is a-okay. If you wrap it all up in a ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Goodbye (Edited 2)

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    Hey! I liked your story, my only problem with it plot wise is that I would like more of it. Some context. I would love to know the whole thing. ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Red Truck

    Of course you helped. Thank you.

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, Dramatic Re: Beautiful Couple

    Hey! You are always so nice when you comment, it makes me blush. Even in your corrections, I can really tell you are trying to be helpful instead of mean. ...

    Feb 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, Dramatic Re: Beautiful Couple

    Okay. I have no idea what is happening with my apostrophes.

    Feb 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, Dramatic Re: Beautiful Couple

    Hey! Thanks for the review, and I%u2019m sorry I left you so confused. I was sort of experimenting with this one. I wanted to see if I could avoid stating ...

    Feb 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, Dramatic Re: Beautiful Couple

    Hi! Thanks for the review. I don%u2019t want to make a novel out of it, but it is intended to be part of something bigger. I am guilty of underwriting ...

    Feb 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: After Curfew

    Thank you for taking the time to read.

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Blown Away

    You are absolutely right. I will be more careful next time an try to make stronger stories. Thanks for the feedback.

    Feb 9, 2016


People ask if I ever experience writer's block and I just have to laugh... that's my default position.
— Aaron Sorkin