MargoSeuss

Thank-you so much for your review and suggestions. This is my first attempt at romance, so I'm glad for any tips. I be sure to work on the things you ...

Thanks so much for your review, Cricket. I appreciate every bit of advice I can get.

Thanks! Check out the other chapters if you liked this one!

Glad you like it. Let me know where you see grammar and spelling mistakes so I can correct them.

Hilarious. :D Best voice recording ever.

S'all good. You gave me some solid advice. I appreciate it.

A semi colon combines two separate thoughts. A colon indicates a list. Thanks for you review. I'll make the other corrections.

A halloweenie is the same thing as an anaconda.

Thanks so much for your review. I've gotten some good feedback for this chapter I intend to use. If you like, you could check out some of the other chapters. ...

Thanks for your comment. Take a look at the other chapters in this novel if you like. I always appreciate feedback!

Well, my friend, you will have to read the other two parts! Jaune is pronounced the same as the name Joan. I spelt her name Jaune because it is in ...

Thank-you so much for your review. Check out chaper 4 when you get a chance. I really do appreciate any kind of response I get so don't hesitate to leave ...

Haha. Okay.

Thanks for your review! I must say this site always screws up spacing. I'll be sure to read through this and fix the issues you mentioned.

Thanks for the review. May I suggest starting this book from chapter 1? There is a reason why Skunk is named the way he is named. I assure you, the ...