MargoSeuss

Once again, thanks for picking out all the little mistakes here. I did mean to say stings. Cavity fluid is a chemical used in embalming. If spilled, it stings your ...

You are not.

Cher and Ruth are the names of the boobs.

Thanks man! I'm thrilled people are reading my stuff! I must admit, my short stories aren't really too short. It really means a lot that you take the time to ...

The look of concern on Melvin's face comes after the two women mention jokingly about murdering their husbands. He is concerned because now he has to be alone with them ...

Actually, I took that bad boy off. I noticed an embarrassing spelling error in my description of it. A'int nobody gonna take a work seriously when there is a careless ...

What's YMMV stand for? The genre is mysterious humour :) I'm workin on it. The answer to the pink dye question again cannot be answered. It is a supernatural happening. ...

Good catch! And I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Thanks for those fine tune edits. Amazing the things one pair of eyes doesn't catch. I'm glad you liked this.

Nobody else could see Mr. Jinx except Terence. As for weather or not he was hallucinating, I can't say yes or no. The reader is suppose to be left uncertain ...

I'm at an impass with this. Another person said it was boring so I cut some of the embalming jargon down. I figured the technical stuff would be what bored ...

Don't be. Tell me where you got bored. A good work is never finished.

Funny you should say this. I have written a book starring these characters. It's called "Tale of the Three Morticians." I haven't put it up because it's 30 chapters long ...

Good lord, I truly am a failure. My goal for this story was to have the reader connect with Terence. Terence's calloused disposition is suppose to be a facade. That ...

When did you get bored!? Let me guess, it was the embalming jargon, wasn't it? This is unacceptable! I have failed to entice a reader. LORD HAVE MERCY! Bloody heck! ...