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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Sunset

    Hello, Aurora! Since this is a real event, I must say that you have much drama in your life. It's good, it's nice. Better than having no drama at all, ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Politics, Dramatic Re: The World I Live In

    First of all, I agree with everything you wrote. It is a world full of injustices and not enough liberty to people. I can't, or don't want, to believe that ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Trepidation

    It was an interesting story. You had different and original characters, that's good. Sometimes I like stories this short, but right now the story, for me, would have been better ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Ben & Beth-Prologue

    Hello, Writer! I don't know why some people don't like prologues, because I find them really interesting. Well, this is good. It shows a girl in the middle of her ...

    Jan 18, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Hunter Games (Ch. 1; pt. 1)

    This is very interesting, though I'd read a book that was something like your piece. At first, I was lost, but then everything seemed to fit. Something that caught my ...

    Dec 1, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: You chose

    I agree with you, guys. Whatever the message means? Um, I really think you should see through it, and fix it. It's in serious needs of replacement. PM when you ...

    Aug 14, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Unwind

    Oh, silly me... I thought you guys were talking about Everwind. Also by Neal. But I guess I was wrong. It had to be wrong because the book comes out ...

    Aug 14, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Whatever it Takes

    The piece said so many things, and I liked it, but I think it could have some tiny things that could be changed. Ever since I saw you I can't ...

    Aug 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: deleted

    Hey, I loved it. It may have some mistakes, but I do A LOT of mistakes, so I'm not judging... But, I loved everything; how you wrote it, and the ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Any good books I can try?

    I'm 13, and one of the authors I dislike is Meg Cabot. I just... can't read a book of hers anymore... So, when I'm online I go for "Books Hunt". ...

    Jun 18, 2009


so many languages have fallen / off of the edge of the world / into the dragon's mouth.
— Lucille Clifton