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Re: A Sunset
Hello, Aurora! Since this is a real event, I must say that you have much drama in your life. It's good, it's nice. Better than having no drama at all, ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: The World I Live In
First of all, I agree with everything you wrote. It is a world full of injustices and not enough liberty to people. I can't, or don't want, to believe that ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Trepidation
It was an interesting story. You had different and original characters, that's good. Sometimes I like stories this short, but right now the story, for me, would have been better ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Ben & Beth-Prologue
Hello, Writer! I don't know why some people don't like prologues, because I find them really interesting. Well, this is good. It shows a girl in the middle of her ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Hunter Games (Ch. 1; pt. 1)
This is very interesting, though I'd read a book that was something like your piece. At first, I was lost, but then everything seemed to fit. Something that caught my ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: You chose
I agree with you, guys. Whatever the message means? Um, I really think you should see through it, and fix it. It's in serious needs of replacement. PM when you ...
Aug 14, 2009 -
Re: Unwind
Oh, silly me... I thought you guys were talking about Everwind. Also by Neal. But I guess I was wrong. It had to be wrong because the book comes out ...
Aug 14, 2009 -
Re: Whatever it Takes
The piece said so many things, and I liked it, but I think it could have some tiny things that could be changed. Ever since I saw you I can't ...
Aug 14, 2009 -
Re: deleted
Hey, I loved it. It may have some mistakes, but I do A LOT of mistakes, so I'm not judging... But, I loved everything; how you wrote it, and the ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Any good books I can try?
I'm 13, and one of the authors I dislike is Meg Cabot. I just... can't read a book of hers anymore... So, when I'm online I go for "Books Hunt". ...
Jun 18, 2009