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Thank you!

Ta is slang for thanks, and also, "I haven't the foggiest" can still be okay, but more informally. I didn't want to stretch it out, as well, as it was ...

Ta is slang for thanks, and also, "I haven't the foggiest" can still be okay, but more informally. I didn't want to stretch it out, as well, as it was ...

I was thinking about putting it in script form, but that seemed too... clinical for the silliness.

10 points to Team Astronaut! Yeah, this one was something I wasn't taking seriously, but thanks for the tips. It'll help in the future.

Ah, one thing I didn't cover was this being a prologue. These events happen about a decade before the rest of the story, so it personally didn't fit for it ...

Thanks for the advice. With the whole ent thing, I hadn't realised Mr. Tolkein had them in his lore (only read the Hobbit, and they don't show up in it). ...

Cheers for the comment! I'm really glad you liked it- it really helps break down the wall of procrastination!