MaraRobin

YES! :D

hahaha noooo it's benedict cumberbatch, he is my favorite actor lol

Yeah, ending with "he says" seems to bring it full circle, but it does work either way, mostly I think its just one of those things that is a matter ...

Thanks :) I wanted to capture the emotion felt by the character but wasn't really sure if I achieved it. I love getting feedback, it helps me keep writing when ...

Thank you so much for your advice!! I promise I will try to get on the next chapter when I find the time, which, unfortunately, I have very little of. ...