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Re: I am Mari (Chapter 1)
Hey! Maple Way here, with a review! This is a great first chapter! Here are some grammatical errors and things I liked! Things I liked The chemicals given were supposed ...
Feb 9, 2021 -
Re: Squirrel and Juniper Trees: Chapter 3
Hey! Maple Way here, with a review! I really enjoyed this installation of your story! It introduced new characters and some important details! I liked the amount of imagery you ...
Feb 9, 2021 -
Re: Squirrel and Juniper Trees: Chapter 2
Great second chapter! I liked how it installed new characters and addressed the conflict of the story! A couple of cons include- "She looked up the word arguing argue." I ...
Feb 8, 2021 -
Re: Squirrel and Juniper Trees: Chapter 1
Hey, Maple Way here, with a review! This is a great beginning! I can feel the potential flowing through it! I have yet to read your next chapters but I ...
Feb 7, 2021