MapleCFreter

This is very good :) I've only read the first chapter and I don't yet know what kind of creature these characters are. Don't get me wrong, that's a good ...

before I get into the talking I just want to get some editing out of the way. I was a much more adept witch, and she didn't like that. This ...

Amazing, just like the last three..... I'm really starting to get into this story. I can't wait for something to happen, other than her just walking around the white room. ...

Wow, this is great, just like the first chapter. When the flashback started I was sure she was going to be kidnapped, but then she escaped... weird. I guess that'll ...

I really liked this :) Even though this is short and I don't really know what it's going to be about yet, I can tell that it is my type ...

Hey, I really liked this! :) I don't know if you are going to turn this into anything more, but this would be a good start for a novel. I ...

I really liked the idea of this and some parts of it actually brought tears to my eyes. However, if this is going to be a novel, then you need ...