Manzanna

The biggest issue that I noticed with it was that you were telling the reader not showing them what was happening. It makes it much harder for the reader to ...

I voted dragon. They're so cool. I'd rather have something that goes RAWR instead of scratching its butt. ^.^

I really enjoyed the story; it caught my attention and drew me in right away. The plot seems to be solid, and I was annoyed at the end because I ...

I did this on Christmas Eve. I ended up creating an entire outline for my novel that I had been stumped on.

I can't listen to music and write. Unless its very quiet classical music. I'm not that good at multi-tasking. ^.^ I find that I'll stop concentrating on my writing and ...

However, what I remember most was the lifeless bodies that where barely recognisable amongst the crumpled metal. Spelling:recognizable His victims where innocent they where heading off to the beach fo

Very short addition that I haven't gotten around to doing a thourough edit. :roll: ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Jenilyn awoke to a toe nudging her sho

Thanks you very much for replying. I really appreciate it, and I will go over and fix what you pointed out.

This is the very beginning of my novel (I'm not sure how its going to be organized yet, so that will change). Its been very lightly edited. I want to ...

It sounds like an interesting thing to do, and I'll probably try it sometime. I can't deal with the timers either so I'd have to skip that part. It stresses ...

This is a really good book. Right now its my favorite book. Its the first good romance book I've read in a while. It made me all interested in vampires. ...

Hey kipsy darling!!! Its Megan!!! Great to see that you joined.

Hah Hah! Catkin left the other two behind when the soldiers were chasing them. She didn’t have to act all noble and try and rescue them. That is something a ...

Good point. I shall try and describe him. Thanks for commenting! I really appreciate it.

My Angel I watched, wide-eyed in fear as the angel descended upon me. He was beautiful--more beautiful than anything I’ve ever seen before. His features are flawless and straight, although ...