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I absolutely love this. It's absolutely great! I loved the pauses you added; it definately gave it flavor. It's so simple, and so thought prevoking. Amazing work!

Wow! This is great! I love this! I'm speechless and in total awe. You said that you're a little rusty, but if this is a little rusty, I'm wondering what ...

Simple, but makes the mind work. I like those kinds of poems, ones that make me think. I think it's great! Maybe the extra "enter" is unnecessary because one could ...

This is really good with nice imagery. I swear my eyes are watering right now. Your wording is absolutely beautiful and I didn't see any over usage or cliches. This ...

This is great so far! I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I'm really drawn into this story, and can't wait to see how Aaron turns out. ...

Thanks guys! I've been trying to make this piece longer, and it's still a work in progress. I'll add more soon, so come back and see what you think!

This is wonderful. I especially liked this sentance The wind picked up, and as is weaved through my hair, it seemed to whisper "Go Tatiana, go!" It drew an image ...

Beautifully written. I love it. It's beyond words. I can't describe it. Well, I guess I can. You showed instead of told. That's always a wonderful factor in writing a ...

Ashley I never meant to die. Five simple, but fatal, mistakes led up to my death. I remember my death-day clearly. It was a Monday, May second to be exact. ...