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These are REALLY good. They look almost real. The only one you could improve on is the last one. These are works of art and I'm excited to see more!

Really great! It's not perfect, but you can work on some things. After seeing this I may post some of my own pictures. Thanks for sharing!

If you were trying to do a simple drawing for a cartoon show or something, it's fine there are things to work on but it's a good start. If you ...

It's BEAUTIFUL! How did you get it to be dark like that?! I love how the sun is like shinning on him. I will follow you, I love this photo ...

I like to review as I go so hear it is and I'll give a general impression when I'm done It's so sad that his own uncle would kick him ...

Beautifully written. I think maybe The woman should tell the daugter the truth about what Daddy does to Mommy and get her out of that home though, just saying if ...

I didn't really understand the point of it. I'm pretty sure you realize this but, Love isn't a disease. Maybe it'd be more easy to follow if you made it ...

So sad.... I don't understand why the mom left her there though.. If the dad was so abusive, why didn't her mom take her with her. She seemed to love ...

Very sad and decriptive but I didn't much understand a few things... for instance who was her keeper and exactly what was she..... Keep writing.

"Baby Girl, please, squeeze mama's hand!" I could hear her, but it was like I was in another body, I couldn't wake up or control my actions. Mom put her ...

I really didn't understand it mostly because it didn't describe much of what was going on.... I felt like I was floating by and not paying attention.... IDK. but good, ...

I like to review as I go- so I will write where I am and What I think. P: Paragraph Five P: Very descriptive, no spelling erors. VERY good, athough ...

It sounds like it'd be a song. I like that you based it on a true story! Please re-read and spell check your work. I found many spelling erors.

I know it's short but it's only the first chapter, please enjoy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Cold air rushed in the door as I

This was very detailed, so detailed in fact that I could practically see everything the girl in the story was seeing. I LOVED this story. Someday I'd love to see ...