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  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Never able to Surrender

    I was sad when I saw it was done. I want more.

    Dec 8, 2011


  • I absolutely loved this, WRITE MORE! The only thing I noticed was this. You didn't finish the quoation marks.>" The thing is Mom. Your opinion hold no value in my ...

    Dec 8, 2011

  • Other Poetry
    Re: When You Realize

    this is bad... I realized this today, while mopping a quiet room... I realized this whole poem when the radio turned on, after I thought about what was going through ...

    Nov 21, 2011


  • Melanie walked into the gym Friday night and headed straight for the front. Spotting Mark alone, she walked over and sat down by him. Brittaney appeared next to them a ...

    Nov 6, 2011

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: I lost my best friend today.

    Please read all of this spoiler This is 100% true. My best friend got taken from the school today, I miss her teribly and according to the school consler, she ...

    Nov 6, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: I lost my best friend today.

    reading this over myself I see millions of mistakes, but I wrote it fast, I was sad, and I am not going to fix it, I just needed to get ...

    Nov 5, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: I lost my best friend today.

    Please read all of this spoiler This is 100% true. My best friend got taken from the school today, I miss her teribly and according to the school consler, she ...

    Nov 5, 2011

  • Romantic Short Stories
    Re: Headlights

    Very descriptive and nicely writen, I loved it because I can relate to the story. It's very unique and full of it's own kind of spice! Now to the nit ...

    Aug 27, 2011

  • Romantic Short Stories
    Re: Gravestone pt.1

    I don't mean to be rude, but hear are my thoughts: The story had a good plot to it. It could be very interesting and exciting if you add some ...

    Aug 27, 2011

  • Romantic Short Stories
    Re: Age is but a number

    HAHA! The end was very funny and surely not what I was expecting at all! Although, throughout the whole story, I felt like you were just telling. I kind of ...

    Aug 27, 2011


  • Great Song I wish i could nit pick this, but lyrics are really hard to do, because you can't hear it. I saw your profile picture though (Taylor) I

    Jun 28, 2011


  • This needs a lot of work. You aren't going to want the ()'s everywhere. So get rid of them and find a way to work what your trying to say ...

    Jun 24, 2011

  • Romantic Short Stories
    Re: Losing Love

    We were returning from that walk to nowhere. The moving van sat in the driveway. His mom motioned for him to join in. He turned and looked at me. "No." ...

    Jun 23, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Star Dust

    beautifully written. Someone already did grammer/spelling correcting, so I don't have much to say. Good book, keep writing.

    May 29, 2011

  • Fantasy Short Stories
    Re: Story yet to be named

    It was writen really nicely, I don't think there's anything wrong with the plot, but you can only get so much out of one page. Anyhow, for someone interested in ...

    Apr 23, 2011


Proud people breed sad sorrows for themselves.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights