ManFromTheSea

I had to remove the story due to contest regulations, sorry.

The structure of it seems a little confusing. I looked and fixed it up a little, this is just a little fix for the structure. Nobody said that my life ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to look at my poem. I have gone through it, following advice and now I think it is much better. It might ...

The first stanza seems out of place with the rest of the poem. It is a very interesting piece of work though, keep it up!

Very interesting, but the rhyming structure is confusing. Are you trying to make lines rhyme at certain points or just anywhere in the play? Good, but not great with some ...

That is quite short, it does sound like something I have heard before. Try to throw something interesting in there and mix it up a little. Keep writing.

Excellent use of writing however, the structure and actual meaning of the poem remain unclear. There are things to question such as ‘it’ and ‘your’ (who are they) which is ...

Hello, I find it very interesting to use a variety of fonts and sizes to create emphasis in your poem it really fascinated me. For areas of improvement, I would ...

This poem is for a contest on Remembrance Day, I would like some feedback to make it as excellent as possible. Hope you enjoy! :smt001 --- A Soldier’s Last Prayer ...