Mallyboomer

Very nice... I like the simplicity of it, and it does get a definite emotion across. I agree with Demeter with at least the word "Unknown" isn't quite right here, ...

I like the concept... chess is a cool topic. A few notes: Who serves his scents Of decaf and muffins This isn't *bad* but when you say "his scents" I ...

Absolutely shiver-inducing. I am no one to critique, I just wanted to say that I loved all of it... the imagery, the perspective. Adina is perfect because she has simultaneously ...

Wow, I really like this... This might be a weird thing to notice, but I love how much punch the verses with short words deliver: I don’t want to be ...