Malavika

*meant to say "what the ribbon signifies" :) sadly, there is no edit option

Hey there. I've edited out the numbers and all. The word 'nutters' does not go well with the mood of the piece, so thanks for pointing that out. And the ...

Thank you for reviewing. About the ribbon, I did say that it let out a "trail of silvery sparks" and "replied to me with tiny sparks or another curve of ...

Hey. Thanks for reviewing. Well, I'm much more comfortable writing fiction/short story than poems. So I think I would not be able to do justice to the idea if it ...