Maki-Chan

Thanks I will fix those up. Btw about the crazy thing. When the police found them they told them about the monsters and such. So the poeple think they are ...

thanks ^_^ Chapter 4 is called "Fights and disappearing"

Good point. I will most defenlty do that. ^_^

I knew you would love it ^_^ I wanted my silent hill fanfiction to be actually plausible (Sorta) and that I want the readers to see how close the 4 ...

lovely poem, but needs a little bit more. Like something explaining about how the two that love each other are different, and are forced apart? A great start, I can ...

you like it? Thanks I am writing this out of boredom, and the fours main characters (Lizzy, Crimson, Ali and Ally) are me and my friends. I was too lazy ...

thanks! and hopefully If I can get off my fat lazy behind I will update and edit stuff! v_v

There are some things that I do agree with angel. I need to make this much better, like you said 'quality over quantity" and I agree. I am glad that ...

W00T! I am glad you like it ^_^

Sigh... I knew something was wrong. I just needed someone to tell me. Thank you, I am glad I got the truth. Cause I didn't really like this. Now I ...

I have posted more!

AW! *head explodes* I am sick for three days and this is what happens! So many reviews v_v I am happy, but a little bit overwhelmed. I will give a ...

thanks for your guys review. I wish I could edit but at this point I can barely read. I hate having colds v_v

Thanks! I will try my best. Besides if it has nothing to do with ANYTHING I will just change it.

it's ok ^_^ I am just not too sure what famous quote to use. Is it ok if I add one in and you can tell me what you think ...