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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: in the habit of turning pages

    I can honestly say I love this my favourite by far! Its imaginative and descriptive, you could almost feel the anxiety of the character.I cant really fault it, it would ...

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: thursday rehearsal.

    Its an interesting piece, I love how it seems to be fairly abstract, a sort of stream of conciousness, I especially enjoyed how you explain the concept of 'failed potential'. ...

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sun

    I think josephbohnenberger said it all, but I couldn't not say anything. Its a lovely piece, I think the personification of the earth and sun, as well as the imagery ...

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The setting sun

    Aww I don't know much about music lyrics, but as a story beautiful told and clear throughout, not at all over complicated like other lyrics Iv heard. Good job. :)

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Pilgrimage

    This piece is really very nice, such great description, you could picture this bohemian type paradise very vividly. My favourite bit are the first two lines, they give just as ...

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Only by Faith

    Hey, I honestly couldn't flaw this. Its beautifully written, the contrast between the idea of the fairy tale that shrouds marriage and the reality of married life is on point, ...

    Oct 26, 2011


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