MajicJumper

Thanks to both of you for the extremely helpful reviews. I'm going to make notes of all of this in my writing!

Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this for me? Thanks!

Dim light filtered into the tumble-down shed through a small, dusty window placed high on the wall opposite the rusty-hinged door. Every board and plank of wood that made up ...

I don't really HATE a lot of books, because I tend to get lucky and find really good ones. But there are those certain few that I strongly dislike. 1. ...