MagnusTerrenum

If you are interested at all, that is perfect. We will not be able to accept any chapter books for about one year. They are much more expensive than smaller ...

By the way, you spell "since" as "sense". Just thought I'd point that out, as that is one word I notice you repeatedly spell wrong. Good luck!

Here, I edited the first part and formatted it better, Alexandra stood next to the stream in the middle of a meadow just out of Cielo Regno. Her excitement made ...

I would recommend trying different book ideas until you find one that you really like. One that fits. I had attempted to write a few books, but sadly did not ...

Try turning on spell check if it is an option for whatever you are using. Most browsers have a spell checker, and Microsoft Word does as well. They weed out ...

Hey, that's pretty good. It's got good style and seems unique. I'd love to see more of it. Nice work.

Could you possibly be more specific when you say the readers may not understand it like I do? After reading the prologue, you know what the sword can do, how ...

Yeah, too much dialogue. I guess I'll change that then. Thanks. It isn't based on anything. It originated from a Norse legend, however it hardly relates to the legend. The ...

Yeah, too much dialogue. I guess I'll change that then. Thanks. It isn't based on anything. It originated from a Norse legend, however it hardly relates to the legend. The ...

Thank you.

Thank you for the review. Let me explain a few things. Magnus Terrenum is the name of the land in which the book takes place, so I am not particular ...

Very interesting story. The writing is good. You need to describe the area better, though. Give the readers a good feel of what the area looks like, and how it ...