Mageheart

First off, thanks for reviewing, BlueAfrica! I really appreciate it. :D I'm glad that you thought this was cute. This was a last minute gift for someone. (Get that joke?) ...

Will do! I'll never stop writing. I'm officially obsessed with writing.

By beat I meant slay the Enderdragon. I'm a fan of it myself, and I've heard that's how you beat the game. You can still do a ton of stuff ...

I forgot to mention this in the post earlier. There's a 3,000 word limit for the contest, and I'm pretty sure I'm currently around 2,100.

Lesson learned: In order to get something done, LadyEvvy must be pestered. Repeatedly. Thanks for the review, by the way, and thanks for the revision! Of course he will. They ...

Thanks for all of the advice, and the review! There's a 3,000 limit for the contest, so I can't add too much. It's around 2,000 right now. Although you can ...

Will do! :D

Thanks for both the review, the advice, and the compliments! I love changes in perspective too. It's fun getting inside a character's head. :D I admit that I hadn't thought ...

Hey Felistia! Thanks a lot for the review! I really appreciate it! :D (I see that I'm not the only one in the smiley mood! XD) Thanks for the compliment! ...

Thanks so much for reviewing! :D I really appreciate it! You're right when you say that Aska is skittish. That's a good idea! I'm really thankful for your advice. You ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! :D I really appreciate your advice for that sentence. And I'm really glad that you're enjoying my story!

Thank you so much for all of that advice! I'm planning on submitting this to a contest, so I wanted to make this the best it can be. You have ...

You're welcome! :D

The revised version is even more awesome! And you're welcome. :D

That's exactly what I was going for! :D Nex is supposed to be on the goofy side, which is an interesting because Ruma is Mr. Serious. I don't even know ...