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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 1.1]

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad Cass and Aspen are convincing best friends! I put a lot of effort into writing them, and it looks like it paid off. I'm ...

    Tue Jul 03, 2018 5:31 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 1.1]

    Thanks for the review! The xvx is actually a line breaker. I've had trouble with some of them on websites I've used in the past, so I tend to come ...

    Tue Jul 03, 2018 5:28 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 1.1]

    Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it. The hiking bag that Cass has is actually supposed to be like the ones my family has - my dad really likes ...

    Tue Jul 03, 2018 5:25 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Childhood Fantasy

    Thanks for the review, @MoonFlower! I really appreciate it. I'll try to clear up what you had questions - hopefully my explanations will make sense! As a quick little comment ...

    Sun Jul 01, 2018 10:04 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: Black Water: chapter 1

    I'm so glad you decided to write it! I've been meaning to review it since it came out, but life's been surprisingly hectic and I haven't had a good chance ...

    Tue Jun 26, 2018 1:56 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Black Water: chapter 2

    You're welcome!

    Tue Jun 26, 2018 1:56 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 19.2

    Aw. Poor Iasquam! It must suck being a hawk and not being able to fly. I know he believes that revealing his "weakness" is a bad thing, but I suspect ...

    Tue Jun 26, 2018 1:45 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 19.1 (Given)

    It looks like you're building up for a confrontation with Terasu! It has to happen sometime soon, and something tells me it's going to be quite entertaining to read. I'm ...

    Tue Jun 26, 2018 1:40 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Of the Forest: Chapter 1, The Winking Kitty (part 2)

    Hello again! I'm back to comment on your story. As someone else mentioned, the sudden shift in characters was a bit jarring. But since there would be some sort of ...

    Tue Jun 26, 2018 12:00 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Of the Forest: Chapter 1, The Winking Kitty (part 1)

    I apologize for taking so long to read this! As I mentioned in my PM, I'll just leave some quick comments on this chapter before moving onto the next. Your ...

    Tue Jun 26, 2018 11:55 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 37

    I know I said I'd just leave a review on the newest chapter but I got a kick out of Kiernan's reaction to finding out Edna is the chosen one.

    Sun Jun 17, 2018 12:29 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Childhood Fantasy

    Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem, and I'm happy that my imagery did its job.

    Fri Jun 15, 2018 10:19 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 18.4

    Bill Cipher, right? Never saw him in the few episodes of Gravity Falls I watched but the internet is a wonderful teacher sometimes.

    Sun Jun 03, 2018 5:42 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Ace of Hearts [Chapter 9]

    I'm glad you liked the exchange! I was worried it wouldn't have the effect I wanted, but it seems like everything went the way it should have. Since I wrote ...

    Wed May 30, 2018 9:57 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Ace of Hearts [Chapter 10]

    Thanks so much for reviewing.

    Wed May 30, 2018 9:54 pm


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)