Mageheart

Hi again! :) Van's character is already so distinct. You can tell that this is his world and he feels responsible for Theo (even though he's not really sure what's ...

Hi Icy! This is very much belated, but I wanted to reply to your reviews. It's much easier to keep track of this when reading in one go, but perhaps ...

This poem was amazing.

Hi again !! Honestly the fact that Temp is the newest chosen one doesn't surprise me. Even though they are a bit bumbling and odd, I think the world is ...

Ahh you have no idea how happy I was when I saw your review !! Thank you so much for leaving it.

Hi, Spearmint! Thank you so much for your review. Van is like, we got out okay so everything's good, while Theo is probably worrying about what's going to happen next ...

Thank you so much for your review! I know I already said it in my reply to your last review, but I'm really getting a kick out of your reviews ...

Thank you so much for your review! I loved reading your thoughts on this part of the chapter and the next part. :) It's like Theo is really a bit ...

Hi Spearmint! :) First off: thanks! I didn't realize it until I started revising some of the later chapters, but that simile is actually going to make a comeback with ...

Hi Spearmint! Thank you for your review.

Hi! The friend that Van was referring to was actually the mannequin thing they found in the room. The comment wasn't too clear when I was skimming that line over ...

Hi! The friend that Van was referring to was actually the mannequin thing they found in the room. The comment wasn't too clear when I was skimming that line over ...

The reply still isn't being posted, so I'll just PM it to you and try to figure out what went wrong when I reply to your next review. :)

Hi Mailice! Thank you so much for your review. I've been trying to send a reply to it for the past ten minutes, but it's not loading for some reason. ...

Hi Icy! Thank you again for the review.