Mageheart

Thanks for the review! I was guessing that the explanation of Telorum, Kartiel and the Dark Mage need more oomph . :) I was about to start writing this section ...

Yeah, I was a bit late with that. :P A lot of the times I'd end up throwing them, and the few I've gone to usually involve sleeping in a ...

Okay so does this mean Aldonius is trans or? I admit I didn't even think of how that might be interpreted. I was trying to write it from Cass's perspective, ...

Thank you for your review! I mean, isn't the whole thing that the contracted picks the...contractee? Shoot, I didn't think of that when writing the conversation. I'll definitely need to ...

Thank you for your review! I plan on replying to your other ones as soon as I get a chance to, but I wanted to get this one taken care ...

Thanks for your review! I admit I was definitely expecting pacing to be brought up in this chapter. I honestly think I'll need a major overhaul of the first chapters ...

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed my chapter. :) Want me to tag you when future chapters of this novel come out?

Thank you for the review! Try not to overdo the whole 'biting your lip so hard you draw blood' thing. It's not really that common. You might do it if ...

Wait but did he lie or did he just not tell Lira anything??? Annnd now I just realized I completely forgot to include the part where she says that he ...

Liar. You've never heard of him but bite your lip hard enough to draw blood at his name? I see you. Oh, he knows Aldonius very well. ;) To be ...

Thanks for the review! He's surprisingly human - even the fact that he didn't realize that Cass and Aspen were there until he moved to where he could physically see ...

Thanks for the review! I just mentioned this down in my reply to Blue's review, but I'll definitely try adding Runi in earlier. And since your point about Lira's dad ...

Thank you for your review! I'm sorry for not replying to it sooner. So this is kind of funny to me because could the golden chain not belong to an ...

Thank you!

Thank you for your review! This really intrigued me. Are they familiar because she's seen them on Earth, meaning that this world has a parallel sky? Or are they familiar ...