Mageheart

Aw, thank you!

Thank you so much for your review! I was hoping the changes would make a difference! I feel like there's a few that I forgot to mention, but I'm sure ...

Whoops, looks like Blue beat me to replying! :P

I have posted the rest of them, actually! :) The story was previously called The Three Lockets, but I haven't had a chance to go through all of the old ...

Aw, thank you!

It does! The predecessor bit is definitely going to be hard to pull off, but I definitely agree with what you said.

(Also, Blue, if you want to reply to this, too, since you've been bringing up a lot of the same concerns, I'm chill with that!)

Hey, Pan! Thanks for the review.

evilly rubs hands together All is going according to the plan~ (Also, thank you so much for leaving comments on every chapter! I keep forgetting to thank you for them, ...

Hey, Blue! I apologize for not replying sooner. I do think I said that in the past, but I'm definitely going to clarify it in the next draft. Although now ...

Hi, Blue! I meant to reply to your review sooner, but it completely slipped my mind. ^^" I completely agree with the pacing issues, and, like you, I'm definitely putting ...

Thanks for the review! Reading it actually inspired me to get off of my butt and seriously consider what I want to happen in the next part, so I really ...

I've been waiting to see your reaction to this chapter!

Thanks for the review! ...Did Lira give her a torch? I feel like she'd be needing a torch soon, but one hasn't been mentioned. Unless Cass has one of her ...

Thanks for the review!