Mageheart

Thank you for your review!

Thank you so much for your review!

Thanks for the review and the advice! Length definitely seems to be a problem with my poems lately - I've been using them mostly to vent, so I tend to ...

Thank you so much for your review! I don't mind you calling me your friend - if you ever want to chat, I'm down for PMing.

You're welcome!

Oooh, interesting! That's a nice twist - I don't see that a lot in vampire stories. Or, at least, modern ones. Maybe you can elaborate on that when someday revising ...

You're welcome!

Pro-tip: splash your eyes with cold water to reduce the redness and puffiness, dry off, and then practice smiling in the mirror until it looks natural again. not that I'd ...

I love your predictions! I can't confirm or deny any of them, but it's definitely cool seeing how you're analyzing the story.

Awwww yeahhhhh the gay is back. Yes. Does anyone know he's got healing magic, aside from like us and Cass? All of Telorum does, actually! It's something I really need ...

Aw, thank you! My tip is to write about what you're feeling. I wrote this poem when I was feeling more than a little down (I thankfully feel better now!), ...

Thanks for the review! That said, I have to return to being a broken record: Pacing. Before the issue was too much of Cassie's interiority, which isn't so much an ...

Aw, thank you! It has a dual meaning, so I'm really excited for you to see how it plays into the plot as I move more along.

In retrospect, that last comment covered most of what I wanted to say. :P Just like with the Rey crew, I'll say to always be a little wary of what ...

Thanks for your review! I'll write a better and longer reply for your review later this afternoon, but I just wanted to say that your feeling of confusion is entirely ...