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  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Price of a Soul [Chapter 1.2]

    Thank you for your review! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far - and that you're interested in the hunter's perspective. :)

    Wed Aug 12, 2020 2:15 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: birds in a hurricane

    Thank you!

    Wed Aug 05, 2020 10:45 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: birds in a hurricane

    Thank you for your review!

    Wed Aug 05, 2020 2:12 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Price of a Soul [Chapter 1.1]

    Also (because I somehow forgot to reply to this part of your review) I love the comparisons you're drawing between your characters and mine! The moment I saw you liked ...

    Tue Aug 04, 2020 3:14 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Price of a Soul [Chapter 1.1]

    Thank you for your review! It's fun reading all of your theories, and I definitely appreciate your advice. :)

    Tue Aug 04, 2020 3:11 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Price of a Soul [Chapter 1.2]

    Thank you so much for the review! I was worried the switch from Azazel to Issac would be confusing, but it thankfully looks like that part was clear.

    Tue Aug 04, 2020 11:09 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Price of a Soul [Chapter 1.2]

    Thank you for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying this story so far. :) And awww!! Thank you for the compliment.

    Tue Aug 04, 2020 11:07 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Price of a Soul [Chapter 1.1]

    Thank you so much for your review! I was actually questioning if pen stains were the right comparison or not, so it's great seeing your input on them. Quinn's never ...

    Tue Aug 04, 2020 11:04 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Price of a Soul [Prologue]

    Thank you for your review! I'm not sure if you saw my wall post, but I actually wrote the majority of this prologue over a year ago - so it's ...

    Tue Aug 04, 2020 11:02 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Price of a Soul [Chapter 1.2]

    Awww, thank you!! I'm glad you liked this chapter.

    Tue Aug 04, 2020 12:06 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Price of a Soul [Prologue]

    Thank you so much for your review! (And for liking this work!) Your review was really helpful - I was actually questioning the wording of the last sentence, too, so ...

    Mon Aug 03, 2020 5:08 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the luxury of lungs

    Thank you for your review! Enjambment is something I definitely need to work on in my poetry, so I really appreciate you pointing out how I could change it to ...

    Fri Jul 31, 2020 10:12 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the luxury of lungs

    Thank you for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. :)

    Fri Jul 31, 2020 10:11 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the luxury of lungs

    I definitely want to try writing a poem with the same theme but with the original motif someday! I just couldn't get it out on paper no matter how hard ...

    Fri Jul 31, 2020 10:10 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the luxury of lungs

    Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked the motif - I'm not sure if you saw my wall post, but it wasnt the original one I had in ...

    Fri Jul 31, 2020 12:48 am


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening