Mageheart

You're welcome! :)

Thank you for your review! I meant to reply to it sooner, but I kept forgetting to do it when I finally had a chance. Ranking the buses how? Cleanliness, ...

Thank you for your review! Your attempt was definitely successful - the next chapter isn't out just yet, but your review inspired me to open the doc and finish it ...

Hello again! :) I agree with the other review on everything, so I don't have much to say about all that. I do have some grammar to mention, and that's ...

Hey there! Thanks for picking up this work to read, even though you haven't read anything from before it. It's too bad that you didn't pick up 3.1 instead of ...

Hi there! Thank you for your review! It's pretty daunting reviewing middle chapters, so I definitely applaud you for being brave enough to do that - especially after just joining ...

Thank you so much for the review! My first thought towards this woman: freak. I hope that thought changed by the end of this section. :P Please no because I'm ...

Thank you so much for the review! Your comments on my grammar/writing style were really helpful, and I really appreciate you trying to help it get out of the Green ...

Thank you for your review! I didn't get a chance to reply to it yesterday, but I couldn't stop smiling after I read it. :) wut Where do the sinners ...

That's okay! It's the first chapter that's listed, so I can definitely see where the confusion came from. :P

Thank you for the review! It definitely was helpful. This was originally written as a flashback in a roleplay, so it didn't require too much context at the time. I ...

Whoops - did a spoiler instead of a quote! :P Thank you again for your review, by the way.

Thank you for your review! :) I could still be missing something. But I think you meant to write "sixteen years of being hidden away from the world" or something ...

^Everyone in this book.

You have no idea how happy I was to see that my work already got a like and a comment on it.