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  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: the house was haunted. [2/2]

    This is another belated reply, but thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed my entire story.

    Dec 28, 2020
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: the house was haunted. [1/2]

    This is very much belated, but thank you for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed the first part of my story. It was hard getting into Abby's head, but it ...

    Dec 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: even i don't trust me

    I'm sorry that you felt this way when you were writing this poem, but this poem is absolutely beautiful. I love how you played around with the formatting and the ...

    Dec 28, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: the christmas musings of a muslim

    (If you get two notifications from me but only see a single comment, it's because I accidentally marked this as a review and deleted it to change it to what ...

    Dec 24, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: the christmas musings of a muslim

    I don't think I can possibly critique this essay, but I just wanted to leave a comment to say how much I love it. I currently go back and forth ...

    Dec 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: about burning evergreens

    Oooh okay! Thanks again.

    Dec 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: about burning evergreens

    I revised the stanza you commented on! If you get a chance, can you tell me how it looks compared to the original version now?

    Dec 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: about burning evergreens

    Thank you! I'm glad you liked my poem. :)

    Dec 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: about burning evergreens

    Ahhh thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

    Dec 16, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: The Witch's Return [2]

    Thank you for your review! :) I appreciate you pointing out the awkward parts of this chapter. Like the author's note at the beginning of the last one said, this ...

    Dec 15, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: The Witch's Return [1]

    Thank you for your review! I'm glad that you enjoyed my book. :) I completely missed the passive voice when I was skimming through this chapter earlier today, so I ...

    Dec 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: the house was haunted. [2/2]

    Thank you so much for your review! I'm really glad all the scenes hit the way I was intending them to.

    Dec 11, 2020
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: the house was haunted. [1/2]

    Thank you so much for your review! It's great seeing your guesses on which character is a ghost. :) I'm also glad you liked how The Lockdown was capitalized! I ...

    Dec 11, 2020
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: the house was haunted. [2/2]

    Ahhh thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked this story as much as you do, and it really made my day to find out it made you feel special. ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: how to treat a case of powdery mildew

    Thanks! :)

    Nov 21, 2020


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