Mageheart

Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. "Edna. Seriously. You don't have to be all right all the time." She hiccuped and laughed and started crying ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Though I may say that I hate when characters lose their memories, I absolutely love when they're trying to ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Your grammar was perfect in this chapter, so I'll focus on the other parts of it. The characters were ...

Hello, GodfreysBouillon! I hope my review can do your work justice. Overall, you did a great job with grammar. I found no errors or typos, and the writing itself was ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax No problems here! Characters Rest in peace, nameless spy. Just like all of the other nameless ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax Your grammar looks pretty good this chapter; I didn't notice any typos or any problems with ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax No problems here! Characters Aw, Edna didn't want to ruin the night! She forgot the majority ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax No problems here, so I'll move onto the other sections! Characters It's interesting reading a chapter ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax No problems here, so I'll move onto the other parts. Characters I take back everything I ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax No problems here, so I'll move onto the other parts. Characters Edna's such a grandmother! I ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax No problems here, so I'll move onto the other parts. Characters Every chapter makes me more ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax No problems here, so I'll move onto the other parts. Characters + Plot (Since this chapter ...

Hello, marms! I hope my review can do your work justice. I've been relying on a template for my last set of reviews, but, seeing as this is the last ...

Hello, marms! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax There's no overwhelming grammatical errors, so I'll just move onto the other two sections! Characters I ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax No problems here, so I'll move on to the other parts. Characters As per usual, Edna ...