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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 20.2

    Hey Fox! I'm back again with another review. "Alarick said-" Jonathan began, but Terasu laughed off his comment. Her voice was loud and erratic. "As if you ever listen to ...

    Jul 31, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 20.1 (Lord of the Rats)

    Hey there, Fox! I'm back again for another review. Not being proficient in fire magic, nor having the stamina to run along the infinity that stretched silently in both directions, ...

    Jul 31, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 19.4

    Hey there, Fox! I apologize for how long it's taken me to read and review the newest chapters of your work. I'm going to try my best to get caught ...

    Jul 31, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 43.2

    Hey, Blue! I'm here to write my final review of the day. So let's go started! I'm not sure why I even need to say this anymore, but your grammar ...

    Jul 19, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 43.1

    Hey, Blue! I'm back again and ready to review. Unsurprisingly, your grammar is looking pretty good. While I felt like the last chapter jumped from part to part (which made ...

    Jul 19, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 42.2

    Hey, Blue! For the third time today, I'm here to review your wonderful story. (And, in the process, knock it out of the Green Room.) Like in the last two ...

    Jul 19, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 42.1

    Hey, Blue! I'm back again to review a chapter about our favorite grandmotherly hero. As per usual, I didn't have any problems with your grammar. While the pacing might have ...

    Jul 19, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 41

    Hey, Blue! I apologize for taking so long to do this, but I'm finally here to review this chapter of the Chosen Grandma. Redway chapters are always entertaining, so something ...

    Jul 19, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 40

    Hey, Blue! I'm back again to review your novel. I couldn't find any typos in this chapter, so I'm just going to move onto the other parts of my review. ...

    Jun 27, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 39.2

    Hey, Blue! I'm here to finally review this chapter. Your grammar is looking great for this chapter, but I'm not really surprised by that at this point. The sentence variety ...

    Jun 27, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 19.3

    Hey, Fox! It's time for me to do an actual review for this story. Your grammar is looking as great as it usually does, so I'll move onto the other ...

    Jun 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Black Water: chapter 2

    Hey, dwyn! I'm back to review your second chapter. I'm going to start with grammar again. I have a few things I want to comment on, but it's nothing major. ...

    Jun 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: Black Water: chapter 1

    Hey, dywn! It feels good to be reading another one of your stories - things just haven't been the same without Juno's novel. Your grammar is looking pretty good! That's ...

    Jun 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 3: Eslthi Sh'teth (Be Still), (part 1)

    Hello again! I'm back to review another chapter of your story. Like all the previous chapters, your grammar is perfect. Since I don't think there's anything else that I need ...

    Jun 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Of the Forest: Chapter 2, Kark for You! (part 2)

    Oh. So that's how their stories are connected. As with the previous chapters, your grammar is great. I suspect I'm not going to be commenting much on that when reading ...

    Jun 26, 2018


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