Mageheart

"At least the two of us are," Soul said, giving a fond look in Zogin's direction. "I'm not sure about anyone else, though." If they had been on adventures like ...

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Loki watched as the others rushed to get Darian Tylenol, but Loki was still trying to figure out what he had said. He replayed the sentence over and over in ...

"My name is Zogin Arwitch," he heard his best friend say from nearby. She ordered another drink. "What's your name? I'm pretty sure I'm going to be the victor, but ...

Hades was grateful that the attention had finally shifted off of him with the arrival of the newcomer, Lily. Now that people were no longer focusing on him, he walked ...

Realizing that his facade had been seen through, he removed the hood to his Artifact. His gaze shifted between Cornyx and the girl, who seemed to be confused by his ...

He stayed silent, growing pale underneath the hood of his Artifact. He had no idea what the woman had just said to him, and he was gaining the sneaking suspicion ...

When the sound of someone screaming from nearby reached his ears, he instinctively rushed to the source of it. He skid to a halt as he started to turn the ...

"Zogin," Soul whined, but she was already ordering another one of the drinks and chugging it down. He should have known that something like this would happen. Zogin was one ...

Now that the man was gone, Hades resisted the urge to sigh in relief. He could finally slip away without his actions being questioned. Besides, the man had certainly not ...

~Schadel H. Kueper~ She was still having trouble comprehending what exactly had led her up to this specific point in time, but she had promised Nendros that she would stay ...

Soul watched as Zogin fished the silver out of her pocket and handed it to the woman at the counter. She had a look to her eyes that Soul recognized ...

Loki had been listening to their conversation in an attempt to distract himself from the current situation. It made him feel slightly better paying attention to their voices instead of ...

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