Mage_Banks

Love it! I like that you call him "He". You are getting dizzy. Like He is confusing you in every way. I actually enjoyed this poem. *Stands up and clap* ...

okay... correct me if I'm wrong. A guy left you right? And another guy came? And he is leaving now too? Well, anyway I liked it. Very emo though. :mrgreen: ...

Wow! I know how you feel! This poem brought back a lot of deep sad memories. If this reallt happenend to you I hope you are better now. This poem ...

I liked it. The main character talking to the audience was smart. I like how you write. But the main thing is you are expressing yourself! Keep it up!! :elephant:

One of my many poems in my journal. Please tell me if its any good. I hope you enjoy it. :) A friend I have like no other He loves ...

This excerpt was written by my gf! I told her she couldn't & I believe she did it! What do you guys think? Concentrate & relax. Those words were whispering ...

Its pretty! Just work on the heads. Or is i suppose to look that way? Anyway its cool! Whats it for your story? :elephant: :)

Kate! I love your story! This needs to be published greatly! When I read it it brings old memories of my dad back! I love how you can make me ...

So so emotional. I cried about him wondering where his father was because I ask myself that question. I felt the little boys pain. Where did you find the emotion ...

Darkness. It was all around me as I walked through the forest. What was I doing here anyway? I began to get a feeling like I was being watched. I ...

Above is the link to my first issue of my magazine. I hope you all will just take a look at it. Just copy the link and paste it in ...

I loved it! Tiger you come up with so much good. Did this take awhile to write? Anyway keep up the great work!

Rose looked out over the destitute land. How long had she lived here? Where was her family? All she had in her hands were two bloody swords. What had happened? ...

Great Work!! I loved it so much. I cant wait for you to finish it. My favorite part is when the robber was telling the clerk for the money. I ...

I'm so glad to be back & I promise this will never happen agian.