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Madsy

Stories

Just a bunch of stories.
  • Help.

    So, this is the first two chapters (or rather pages) of a short story I've been writing. I'd just like to see what people think about it. :)

    • Short Story
    • Teen Fiction ยท Dramatic
    9 min read


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