Made_In_Demise

Okay, hi! I found the last two paragraphs (not going to count that lonely little sentence a paragraph) pretty confusing the first time I read it. Well, actually, I still ...

A little something I wrote...not really sure how the feedback for it will be. I'm actually pretty nervous to put it up here because I know it isn't really good. ...

Not gonna lie. That really freaked me out. XD But I liked it a lot. Especially the really just drew me in. I was just glancing over the homepage and ...

Wow. Uh...this is different. Which is probably a good thing. XD Man, I thought it was about humans for a minute there and couldn't stop reading. Anyway, I think you ...

It was snowing like crazy here, too. We ended up with two days of no school. Bwhaha.. Anyway, pictures! I love them but I like wintry things in general. I ...

Oh, he's so cute. I like the whole thing with the eyes. It gives it a different look. Man, I can't do anything like that with a computer. I'm a ...

LOL! The first is great. Except her nose looks slightly deformed. That was one of the thoughts that just popped into my head when I was looking at it. And ...

The first, third, fifth and last I loved. The dog looked so adorable in the fifth. And how did you manage to get your dogs to look at your camera? ...

I loved the twist at the end. It was something I didn't expect and explained the whole Kevin thing in Scene One. At first I thought Kevin was the name ...

Didn't even notice this was updated until today. Anyway, this snippet of Chapter One was incredibly short. If you don't mind, try to lengthen it up. Kind've annoying to only ...

Wow. It took me a second to actually realize these weren't pictures. XD But Gladius is right. You're really harsh on yourself. Your art work is actually really good. If ...

And just when I thought all 14 year old guy's completely sucked at everything here you are with your writing. I just have a few comments and a few complaints. ...

Second, third, and fourth are the best. The rainy window one isn't too good. It doesn't really live up to the others when you put it last. I love the ...

Since AWritersFantasy already fixed your grammar for you I'll just review and tell you what I liked and disliked. Okay, you really drew me in. It takes a lot to ...

LOL! I bow down to you for writing this. I've always hated this series with a passion and this was amazing. I was laughing so hard through most of it. ...