Maddyc

7/10 Didn't make me cry (am I heartless?) so I felt it didn't do it's duty... Brokeback Mountain

I don't think this was as good as chapter one, but it was still enjoyable. The thing I like about your writing is that you don't overdo it so it's ...

It would be cool if you could make it a bit like that book Guliver's Travels where something about this alternative world reflects something about our own. In that example ...

Reason for writing It's a need really. I'm like you, right now I don't write for anyone but myself. One day I will write something intended for an audience that ...

I loved the first three, but the last one was a bit of a disappointment. She didn't intend to write four when she started and I think the series was ...

This is a short story I wrote for my English class. I haven't handed it in yet, but I will when I go back to school. Hope you enjoy! Oh ...

I've always written down crazy stuff in notebooks and started stories that never got going, but I started seriously writing at about 11 or 12. I think I was 12 ...

Hey, welcome to the website :wink: Okay, in my honest opion I think this has potential but needs work. It's a good way to open a story, but I think ...

The Good I like! :wink: This was very well written and there were no grammar mistakes as far as I can tell. The characters were interesting enough to keep me ...

You Are Not Alone makes me cry. I also love They Don't Care About Us.

You know you're a writer when the idea of life without writing is not a life worth living.

I think I'd be drawn to 'Never Again' if it had a really awesome front cover. I think 'Sending my Heart' sounds a little bit gushier than I'd usually go ...

Castles are the usual. Followed by museums, sweet factories and zoos. Depends where in the country you are. If it's Yorkshire then go with a trip to the mines. Been ...

My characters and story seem quite seperate from me, so no I don't talk to them. I hear them talking to each other a lot, sometimes when I'm not even ...

I prefer the first idea because I think if you really got going with it it would be great. To make that kind of thing work you really need to ...