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Re: The Nail Scarred Hand
Hi GAM, I think this started brilliantly and tapered off a bit towards the end. After reading the first few paragraphs I was drawn in and eager to read more, ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Fear Brings Death and Death Brings Fear...
Am I brave soul for replying? Or is this some kind of trap, and once I've replied you'll do something evil like suck the life out of my computer and ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Tell us the last thing you said in your mind (thoughts)
I hope my brother and my step-sister aren't going to come into my room and disturb me, they're being loud...one, two, three, four, take the elevator out the hotel yorba ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: The Fire Alarm is Going off. Time to Update my Status.
Well the first thing I have to say is that I just love the title! I always think a good title is important to stories (it was the reason I ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: They Call It 'Broken Britain' Prologue
Hi, this is a prologue to a novel I plan to write when I'm done editing my last one. Would love to get some feedback - mainly interested in hearing ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Editing Tips Anyone?
Well guess what? I just finished my mega long, mega painful assembly of badly placed words I choose to call my novel. It took a year *wipes brow* but now ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: My Chemical Romance are back...
I used to be their biggest fanatic alive, but I've sort of grown out of them over the last year. But I still too sentimental to take down the 'death ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: What would YOU do?
...very cliched start to a horror movie! Hm, I'd probably be excited because it would be excellent writing matieral.
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [4]
Banned for not capitalising 'lol' and missing off a full stop. Lol.
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
Don't joke! MJ and Nickelback are genius! Methinks a 9/10, though I've never heard of Between the trees. I'm Kissing You - Des'ree Stan - Eminem The Story - 30 ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
6/10...Mcfly only in if I'm in a very specific mood. The only other one I've heard of is Underoath and I'm not exactly a fan, nevermind. Where Is The Love? ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: What are you listening to right now?
The Denial Twist - White Stripes
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: To Juddy
This is really incredible. The first and second bits are so sad they nearly made me cry :cry: You have a real talent here - you should think about entering ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Help me
I really like this, it has a real urgancy about it. I like the first part very much especially the first line. Did God make me imperfect? Did God make ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: 10 and 11 year old Thugs brutally torture two boys.
Yes, but you have to think about where that stuff came from. Who did it to them first? No 11-year-old kid does that kind of thing for no reason. To ...
Nov 20, 2009
