Maddy

Hey austenite, here as you requested. Anyhow, your grammar is fine, which saves me a whole lot of ranting. Hooray :) Things I liked >You're dialogue's fantastic. It flowed really ...

Majic, your review is done! :)

Hey Majic, here as you requested. Seeing as this was fairly alright grammar-wise, and due to the size of the piece, I will not be nitpicking. Plot: Not bad. I ...

Be right on it, Majic and austenite. Violet, your review is done. :)

Hey Ultraviolet, here as you requested. Plot: You’re plot is intriguing: not completely original, a little bit corny, but definitely interesting. I have notice one major flaw however (I’ve also ...

Done!

Hey Shubhi, here as you requested. So, seeing as a fair few people have nitpicked your story to the world’s end for me, I’ll focus on plot. Characters: Ananya: Great ...

Be right on it, Shubhi. :)

Done! :)

Hey skins, my friend :) I have discovered the downfall of this piece: You’re repeating your endings and beginnings too often, and the tone is so casual it hurts. Yep. ...

Rascalover: Done!

Hey, Rasca, here as you requested! Because I haven't read the previous 14 chapters of this, I'll just nitpick the grammar. It’s fat limbs were saturated with lights and ornaments ...

All finished! :)

This is wasted potential. I have to come out and say it. It needs to be lengthed. Not much description is pointless, but too much, as you have, is lethal ...

Skins ans Stela, your reviews are completed.