Maddy

Hey cannon, it's Maddy here, happy to return a favour. ;) Okay, so I'll go straight onto your grammar. Nitpicks: So here he was, three weeks later , in Eastbourne. ...

Thanks, Cannon! I totally agree with your comments, but unfortunately for me, the contest I'm entering this in has a word limit of 2000 and I'm pretty much on the ...

Hey Georgie! Sorry it took me soo long to review this. I've been pretty busy, and now that I seem to have free time, I decided to (finally) finish it. ...

Haha georgie, this is my short story :D

Hey Ellen ;) Going to review this for you. Nitpicks: and treasured those brilliant stars that illuminated the nights sky. Lose the "s" on the end of night sky. all ...

Even hearing their voices made Ivanna feel sick. No pair should act like that , she thought. Especially in front of me . The weather was perfect for a picnic, ...

Friday, 4th May There is nothing more annoying to awakening to the sound of a drilling alarm noise at seven am. As soon as you hear it, especially after having ...

Hey :) Wondering if you YWSrs could pretty please review my novel. Only the prologue and chapter 1 has been posted, but more will come. Here's the link to the ...

Crazy, could you please tell me at what point exactly did it start to get boring?

Today… May 3rd “Thanks for coming!” I greet Donald and Anna, my neighbours, cheerfully, holding the front door open. Donald steps insides and give his feet a quick wipe on ...

Comments/Thoughts welcome, grammatical fixes especially welcomed. Prologue. 8 years ago… An eight-year old girl by the name of Talia is playing dress-ups with her collection of dolls in her bedroom.

There's nothing grammatical I couldn't find wrong in the one you've attached. Everything's good. You should probably now replace that one with the one you've posted on here ;)

Actually, I'll just attach it. It would be easier. Haha :)

Georgie, you are the bestest, and I very much did just edit all of this. I'll e-mail it to you, seeing as it is in colour and I really can't ...

Ellen, your poetry is so gorgeous! This has to be one of my favourites! :D